editing

Write or Refine a Poem in a Chosen Form

Draft or improve a poem in the form you want — sonnet, haiku, free verse — around your subject and mood, with the craft explained.

Sharpen Your Opening Hook

Draft and critique first lines and opening pages that pull a reader in fast — with the reasoning behind each option.

Get a Developmental Critique of Your Draft

Get honest big-picture feedback on plot, pacing, stakes, and character arcs — a diagnosis of what's working and what isn't, not a rewrite.

Line Edit and Polish Your Prose

Tighten prose, vary sentence rhythm, and cut filler and clichés — while preserving your voice, not flattening it into generic AI prose.

Change a Passage's Point of View or Tense

Rewrite a passage in a different POV (first, third, limited, omniscient) or tense, keeping the meaning and voice intact.

Turn Telling Into Showing

Convert flat 'telling' passages into vivid, in-scene 'showing' — sensory and specific — without changing what happens.

Fix Flat Dialogue

Rewrite a scene's dialogue so each character sounds distinct, the subtext lands, and it reads like people actually talking.