Give Constructive Feedback on Student Work

    Help me give useful feedback on a student's work.

The work (paste it), and the assignment it was for: {{student_work_and_assignment}}
Grade level and subject: {{grade_and_subject}}
What I'm assessing / the rubric or goals: {{criteria}}
The tone I want (warm, direct, formal) and how detailed: {{tone_and_depth}}

Please draft feedback that:
- Names **specific strengths** — what the student did well, pointing to actual moments in the work, not generic praise.
- Identifies the **most important things to improve** — a focused few, not every flaw at once (too much is discouraging and gets ignored).
- Gives a **concrete, doable next step** for each — what to try, not just what's wrong.
- Uses an **encouraging, growth-oriented** tone appropriate to the age — honest about the work without deflating the student.

Base the feedback only on the work in front of you — don't assume things about the student's ability, effort, or circumstances you can't see, and keep it about the work, not the person. This is a draft for me to review and personalize before it reaches the student. If the assignment goals are unclear, ask.